When you are reading your manuscript, do you get the feeling that there is something left to tell? If you do, you're not done yet! Many writers publish work that leaves their readers feeling that something is missing. How can you make sure you don't leave your readers hanging?
Key information - Writers will sometimes refer to a bit of information and never completely explain it. This usually happens in "how to" and instructional books. Sometimes the reader should know the information by now, for example, if they are reading the second book in a series or have prerequisite work in that area. Many times, you're speaking to an uneducated reader that needs the additional information to completely understand your point. When in doubt, make sure it's clear within the context.
Take two - Unless you intend to write a follow-up book to pick up a story line or continue your teachings, never leave your readers wondering about major details. Occasionally, writers will leave a little bit to be desired, such as how Tom Clancy wrote Patriot Games leaving readers to guess if Cathy was having a boy or a girl. If you read other books in his Jack Ryan series, this question will answer itself. Readers won't be very happy if you fail to completely handle the bad guy or explain what you mean by, "my Mount Vesuvius."
A sense of satisfaction - Sometimes, no matter how complete each chapter is, the overall book isn't satisfying to readers as a complete work of information. Many times this is due to missing information, and sometimes it's simply a lack of research on the writer's part. Have people read your work. Even if they don't like it, they should recognize whether or not it feels complete.
Poor grammar - If grammar is your challenge, work on that first. Don't sacrifice your grammar to get a book published quickly.
Ineffective style - Often, all a writer needs is a good piece of inspiration to help them create their own unique and solid style. When you're not sure what to write, read. Don't copy word for word; learn how other writers have developed their phrases and practice doing the same.
It stinks when you get to the end of a movie and you still feel like something is missing. Don't let it happen to your writing. If, when you are editing, there is something left to tell, tell it. Make it complete and your readers will come back for more.
